Friday 27 February 2015

Research and Planning

Research: notes on at least THREE similar texts to the one you are creating. What are the key conventions? What can you learn/borrow from the examples you have looked at?
Never Back Down (2008) – Final Fight scene

In this fight scene, there are two teenagers that are having a fight in a parking lot, so to say a street fight, where they are going blow to blow with each and trying to get the other to tap out. The main conventions of fight scenes are the right camera angles and shots, along with fast paced editing. This scene has the right camera angles and shots, however it is more an Mixed Martial Arts type of fight, so the submission based moves, however there were a few punches that we can utilise as the camera angles are simple yet effective.

Blood and Bone

This fight scene is simple amazing as it flows with such consistency the shots and angles flow well together.  This scene is a prime example of the main conventions of fight scenes are the right camera angles and shots. When Bones was fighting Hammerarms were fighting, long shots were used to show the full images, for example when Bones spin kicked or fly kicked Hammerarms the full impact was shown and it made the whole combo of shots flow in coherence. In our production we can use this low angle long shot in order to show a full effect of the hits and punched, or at least adapt it to be a medium low angle shot to show the characters have been hit in the face. Also, some of the moves that have been used, and this may be useful to use in our production. For example, the spin kick looks simple but deadly. There was a point of view shot from Hammerarms after he had taken a hit to the head, that POV was effective as it showed that Hammerarms was dazed, this was evident from the blurred shot. 

Fast and Furious 5

This scene was a work of brilliance, its fast paced editing was so effective in putting the whole sequence of events together, from the moment The Rock entered to the end where Vin Diesel punches Rocks face. The Rock and Vin Diesel’s fight was a cinematic miracle. The cuts and shots were fit so well that it flowed and delivered. the long shots cutting to close ups was in such a flow it made the fight seem all more realistic. There are a few low angle close ups that I would use, as it presents the actors expressions, which thus presents the passion and emotions of the characters, as well the blood which is pouring down the faces. 

Friday 6 February 2015

Critical Investigation Learner Response

WWW- significant engagement with the texts....clear knowledge and passion for topic

EBI - Written english poor from opening sentence
- research is woefully short: you are 25-30 footnotes away from your target grade
- Vast majority of essay is simply telling the story of certain films- not even textual analysis (shot type, camera movement, editing etc.)
-very little acedemic research, media theory or debate.
-Lack of focus on the question
Bibliography poor: this won't get you out of level 2 books? journals? stuff from BFI? you haven't even got the book i specifically purchased for your essay.


Aim for second draft: A mark 40-43
Improvements for Second draft:
1) Stick to Analysis: by this I mean actually analyzing the shots and editing rather than telling a story and explaining the narrative. I need to use the keywords and be specific in the scenes that I have picked out and then infer/imply the meaning linking to the gender stereotypes.

2) Research - I need to increase the amount of research that needs to be inputted in to my essay, i need to add in at least 20+ footnotes, so that i can at the least get my target grade 

3) In order to bring my essay up to an academic essay standard I will need to include in academic research from the BFI, the book sir bought and along with that attempt to include in more media theories and debates. 

4) I need to improve the feminist paragraph and add more academic evidence to support the feminism section and strengthen the argument to this i will find more real life examples in which women are standing up for themselves.

5)I need to repeatedly keep the focus on the question by linking it back to the question.